Assignment 1 Who Am I?

posted on 20 Nov 2009 16:39 by devilpal

 

                                       Who Am I?

 

       I am a cute yellow bear, I tall nearly 22 inches and I

have fat shape. I always wear red t-shirt. I have little brains,

and I do a lot of silly things. I like enjoyment. In the  free

time, I like to compose songs and poems. The honey has

necessary for me because I like eating it very much and I

can not lack it. I have many friends such as Eeyore, Tigger

and Piglet. Do you know? Who am I?

 

 

     

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Your paragraph is well-organized with appropriate word choices. Some errors are found, but they are not serious.
1. I tall nearly 22 and I have fat shape. - I am nearly 22 inches tall and fat.

#6 By Aj. Anny (118.172.189.41) on 2009-12-20 19:06

Good.

#5 By Aj. Anny (118.172.189.41) on 2009-12-20 19:02

It is pooh

#4 By faii on 2009-11-24 15:34

You are the fat bear. Your name are
Pooh.

#3 By killkaku on 2009-11-22 05:48

You are Pooh.

#2 By Bew Peeraya (114.128.138.249) on 2009-11-21 20:40

You are Pooh.

#1 By Apinya Jongsathapornpun (117.47.62.213) on 2009-11-20 22:48